Project 6: Jellyfish World; ANIMATIC 2

After presenting our animatic to Mike, Conann and the class, we received some mixed feedback. They seemed to like the character design and our attempt at non-linear storytelling. However there seemed to be some issues with 'cut to action' timing and visual communication with some aspects of the landscape. For example, the oncoming crowd of crabs in the distance appeared too similar to the shape of the floating islands and therefore needed to be fixed. The animatic in general felt a little too rough and choppy. Thus, we took it upon ourselves to fix these problems and make the animatic have a smoother finish overall. We added in more frames to fix this. There were some minor issues with sound also that we had to tweak. However, after this had been done, we were quite happy with the finished product. You can watch the finished version here:

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